aburame style butterfly jutsu

following on the comments from my OC thread, here are the thorough explanations.
due to the amount of work and page flipping, i will do this in sections and afterwards notify forum members when its complete. all jutsus are based on actual naruto jutsus and use the same rank as the original.

Jutsu: twisting path of the larva.
Rank: C ninjutsu
Description: this allows the user to travel underground by burrowing. note that he can still be visibly detected as a mound will protrude from the ground wherever he goes during the technique.
Requirement: earth release
Weakness: vulnerable to attack during this jutsu as he cannot defend himself while travelling in this manner.

Jutsu: fury of the tiger moth
Rank: C taijutsu
Description: a rising back kick that sends the opponent into the air, user can leap up and assault his target with a series of strikes before knocking the battered opponent back down to earth.
Requirement: N/A (see >>> http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lion_Combo)
Weakness: has to be in touching distance in order for this jutsu to be effective. it can be blocked.

Jutsu: the night before chrysalis
Rank: B genjutsu
Description: summons a caterpillar the size of a puppy from another dimension. this docile creature cannot actually do any damage nor can it be hurt, it will crawl upto it's target and explode releasing a small swarm of parasitic butterflies that can immobilize the opponent for a few seconds.
Requirement: activated through a summon
Weakness: as expected of a caterpillar, this attack is quite slow and has short range of 21 meters. at that point the caterpillar will explode anyway. because the attack is easily avoidable, the user must trap the target in order for the genjutsu to be successful.


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About the night before chrysalis, you need to explain what the genjutsu actually do rather than just said that it can take down an opponent. How does it take down the opponent?

oh i see....

sorry about that.

EDIT

fixed the chyraslis jutsu.

more to come later.

Not really much of change but whatever. Anyway, a jutsu that is sure to knock down a target if it hit is OP even if it you says its easy to avoid. I'd suggest you change the effect a little and make it paralyze the target for a moment before slowly ripping them of their consciousness..

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i have weakened the effect in accordance to your message.

You have my Yes.

Anyway - is that taijutsu move only a different name for Lion's Barrage, or there is some kind of difference?

Its alright now. You got my Yes and thus these jutsu are approved.